I've posted a copy of the original paper
here.
I have scanned the actual paper (linked above) and don't see any obvious flaws. The Tesla Model S comes off looking like a wash as compared to a BMW 7 series gas guzzler, but the smaller EVs have tougher competition from small ICEs. And eastern coal burning states sway the results compared with the west.
Perhaps some of us can find a fatal flaw in the arguments, but pointing to the "externalities" of getting fossil fuels out of the ground and refining them to products that can be burned is not a valid rebuttal, since those processes apply just as much to fossil fuels burned in electric power plants. The assumption on the part of the authors is that all electricity comes from the local grid. They go to a lot of trouble to characterize the grid in every county and every power plant.
So, we may have to actually clean up the grid to fulfill the EV promise; which is no big surprise.