Yes, exactly. Optical illusion or not, it looks bad when you're looking at the car. I took two friends to the test drive, and they both said, "Ew, what's wrong with the trunk?"
Further, please click on the photo of the white car that I posted, and zoom it to full original resolution. Look at the fit of the bumper cover, the rear quarter panel, and the trunk lid in the area below the tail light. Whether or not the gap variation on the inclined portion is an optical illusion, the fit at that intersection below the tail light is not very tight.
This was the original design intent of how the trunk should fit:
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(not my own photo; found via web search)
Now, obviously, there are constraints related to function and manufacturability, etc, and I do understand that. So maybe this is the best that could realistically be done. But aesthetically, the gap is a problem in my opinion, so I think Tesla will have to address it, perhaps with a subtle redesign of that area in a later model year. I'm still hoping that it can be tweaked for better aesthetics this year, though.