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#ProjectLoveday Tesla 2017 Commercial Submission

Discussion in 'Tesla' started by SurnameLittleF, Jun 7, 2017.

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Thoughts?

Poll closed Jun 14, 2017.
  1. Good

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  2. Not that good, bruh

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  1. SurnameLittleF

    SurnameLittleF New Member

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  2. HankLloydRight

    HankLloydRight Fluxing

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    Can't really hear the voiceover in the second half.. the backing track is too loud.

    To be honest, it's kind of a "meh" for me compared to some of the other submissions. Sorry.
     
  3. SurnameLittleF

    SurnameLittleF New Member

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    Appreciate the feedback. Thanks!
     
  4. BluestarE3

    BluestarE3 Active Member

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    • Not sure I understand the significance, to the message, of the
    • shots of the urban landscape;
    • various closeups of the driver (legs, face, shoulder tattoo);
    • bumper-to-bumper traffic (i.e., does Tesla somehow alleviate traffic congestion")
    • You show an empty and rusted out gas station (old, dirty energy?), but then you cut to a shot of a "DANGER" sign at a hydroelectric dam, which leaves an impression that electricity is also an undesirable form of energy
    • What is meant by the "breaking point"?
     
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  5. ModelX

    ModelX Active Member

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    I love a lot of the visual, but i think I am to obtuse to get the message.
     

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