#ProjectLoveday Tesla 2017 Commercial Submission

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[HankLloydRight]

Can't really hear the voiceover in the second half.. the backing track is too loud.

To be honest, it's kind of a "meh" for me compared to some of the other submissions. Sorry.

 

[SurnameLittleF]

Can't really hear the voiceover in the second half.. the backing track is too loud.

To be honest, it's kind of a "meh" for me compared to some of the other submissions. Sorry.

Appreciate the feedback. Thanks!

 

[BluestarE3]

• Not sure I understand the significance, to the message, of the

• shots of the urban landscape;
• various closeups of the driver (legs, face, shoulder tattoo);
• bumper-to-bumper traffic (i.e., does Tesla somehow alleviate traffic congestion")

• You show an empty and rusted out gas station (old, dirty energy?), but then you cut to a shot of a "DANGER" sign at a hydroelectric dam, which leaves an impression that electricity is also an undesirable form of energy
• What is meant by the "breaking point"?

 

[ModelX]

I love a lot of the visual, but i think I am to obtuse to get the message.