Ok, after several coats of paint I have finially gotten it to the same level as the original paint. I still need to work on the touchup as the chip is still visible from 5ft. Despite this, the paint match is very good for my Very Orange color. I don't see much metallic flake in the paint, but for small touchups looks ok.
After using the pens, I would recommend trying the bottled paint paired with an artist set of pencil brushes. I think that would be easier to apply without applying too much pressure on the surface.
Anyone know where I can get 2BU00 (Glacier Blue) touch-up paint? I gave my detail shop the code, and the Lotus code, for this color but what they got when they tried to order it was incorrect (too dark).