It's a good essay and I commend you for it.
Here are a few points to consider if you care to re-create it for other audiences.
EV Comp section
* You appear to focus on 0-60 as a defining point in making comparisons. You may wish to tailor your Important Criteria when assessing your audience/readership. Just a thought.
* You write "...provides better performance, luxury, and convenience at the same price levels..." Do NOT omit adding
safety to those criteria!
NON-EV Comp section
* It would be excellent for you to pair Lutz's comment with that made two weeks or so ago by GM's current CEO regarding TM. Makes for a delicious time-tempered counterpoint.
* Preantepenultimate paragraph (

look it up): "Tesla focused on....." --> once again, insert
safety . This is an ace-in-the-hole for which it is nigh-IMPOSSIBLE to provide a counterargument.
CONCLUSION section
* You nicely and appropriately focus on the difference between
technological vs.
business model disruption, citing Polaroid, but then you do not follow through with that when discussing BMW. With a little more work, I think you could elegantly keep that flow and strengthen your argument.
EPILOGUE section
* Regardless of the fact that as a long-term shareholder, I disagree with your assessment of the stock price, I think that your discussion of its present price is weak. You presented this essay, after all, in Motley Fool. The rest of the excellent piece deserves a stronger justification of your opinion.
Once again, good job!