OK, here's version two. I tried to address all comments:
vfx said:
To the Lowest drag line I would add the word "ever".
stevezzz said:
Something came across the wire recently about a new sedan with an even lower drag coefficient..can't remember who makes it, though.
Seems a little controversial with the EV1, even though the Tesla aerodynamicist said the Model S was better. Hard to substantiate. So changed wording to show lowest drag coefficient of any car on the road. Neither EV1 nor MB CLA are on the road.
vfx said:
Answer the charge time question. (drop transmission or add to Fuel line)
Done. I tried to stay realistic with both Supercharger (1.5 hrs) and 240V 80A (3-4 hrs).
vfx said:
Consider dropping the white car window thru red. the center profile has none.
Dropped the white car altogether.
jwal said:
may want to change the year to 2013 (unless your car is from 2012, then it's your call)
Car is a 2012, so decided to leave it that way.
kinddog said:
That said, since you gave the full price range, you need to include the full range of accel times across models. kind of misrepresentative how you have it now...
Good point. Put the price of the performance version and clarified it as so.
geekgirls said:
I love the layout. It's great at drawing you in from a distance, and there's lots of good information to ponder once you're hooked. I do feel that it's a little too wordy and would tighten the text up wherever you can, but there's nothing I'd lose altogether. One minor nit: the "lowest drag" bullet point probably shouldn't be hyphenated and the second line should be indented appropriately.
I thought it was too wordy and full of text as well--so got rid of the line drawings, made text more concise, and added some empty space. I think it helps.
joefee said:
Too many fonts/colors/backgrounds IMO. Also, since the car will be there, take out Model S line drawings.
There's only one font on the whole poster. 4 colors: black, white, yellow, red. Line drawings are gone. Needed something to break up the areas of text. Taking out the "boxes" makes the poster appear a little bit *too* boring. Tried to improve this some.