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Terrific Tesla

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  1. daxz

    daxz Member

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    My 10 year old daughter had an assignment to write a jingle for her writing class and would like to share it:


    Terrific Tesla

    A Tesla doesn't use gas
    but it can go really fast.
    A Tesla is a quiet as a mouse,
    and you plug it into your house.

    A Tesla is fun to drive,
    it makes you feel alive.

    A Tesla can go really far,
    for an electric car.
    It can go about 250 miles,
    which makes people smile.

    A Tesla is fun to drive,
    it makes you feel alive.

    A Tesla is a safe car,
    it gets five stars.
    Its made from aluminum which is really strong,
    so bring the whole family along.

    A Tesla is fun to drive,
    it makes you feel alive.​
     
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    Tell her great job!
     
  4. Kandiru

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    Some brains for a 10yo, congrats!
     
  5. David29

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    Excellent! and creative, too.
     
  6. S4WRXTTCS

    S4WRXTTCS Active Member

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    I might steal

    "A Tesla is a quiet as a mouse,
    and you plug it into your house."



     
  7. CHG-ON

    CHG-ON Still in love after all these miles

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    Now that's one talented little girl! Tell her very nice job.
     
  8. dsm363

    dsm363 Roadster + Sig Model S

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    Great job!
     
  9. Bonlaw

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    :biggrin:
     
  10. Half Dollar Bill

    Half Dollar Bill Traveller, teacher, poet, accountant

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    This would be a welcome addition to the poetry thread. Please cross-post it there where it will have plenty of company.
    Tesla Poetry / Limericks / Haiku - Page 10
     
  11. fancycar

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  12. bmah

    bmah New Moderator, Model S / Model X Forums

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    Your daughter hit all the main points. Very nicely done!
     
  13. MikeL

    MikeL some guy

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    :biggrin: Artistic is cool. & it makes you feel alive. You can quote me (& her!) on that one.
     
  14. GoTslaGo

    GoTslaGo Learning Member

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    Love it! Maybe you can upload the song to YouTube :biggrin:!
     
  15. rogbmw

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    Really cool - congrats to your daughter....a future TESLA owner!
     

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