(moderator note: I see the PDF attached to the secondary posts you made, and took a look at it. It appears to be a regular PDF so I have left it there. The file in your original post did not appear to be a PDF which is why I removed it).
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(regular post content, representing myself not as a TMC mod)
OP, you might have the wrong impression here. TMC is not affiliated with Tesla in any way, other than being an unofficial message board. We have no way to pass on anything to tesla. You also have your personal information in that PDF (name, etc) which is not something most people in todays times would post online like that. Of course its up to you, but its not something I would do.
If you wanted to get discussion going about what you are talking about here, it would have been better (in my opnion) to copy all that text inside the PDF into a post here, and upload the picture into the post as well (the same way you did the PDF). There isnt any reason I see for that being a PDF and not a regular post. You would likely get more feedback on it if it was just text here vs a PDF, even though it wont be escalated to tesla from posting it here.
The above is all said as a regular poster and is not ment as moderation direction (everything below the dashed lines).