The author’s email is at the end of the article. I sent her the following:
Sara,
Could you give any depth to the described situation?
Is Red Bull one of the free snacks that are always available to Tesla workers, or only for last week of June? Was anyone asked to drink Red Bull?
What are the circumstances of the raw sewerage? Did a toilet overflow or did a main drain pipe rupture? How large was the area of contamination by sewerage? How long did it take Tesla to have the situation cleaned up?
Not giving this kind of depth seems inappropriate. If you were asked to craft this piece in this shallow manner, it must feel awful as a journalist. Your previous employer, the Boston Globe, would not have requested such a piece. It makes me sad.
Jeoffry