Comparing side by side the versions that Curt posted and what I presently pull from WSJ, it is abundantly clear that this article has been rewriten. The WSJ is much better written stylistically and the tone has been soften and content better supported. I belief Curt's version to be closer to what Ramsey orginally wrote, and therefore more revealing of the author's intention. Note a couple of quotes from Curt's version:
"While Tesla's inventory is far lower than mainstream competitors, ..." WSJ editors removed this comparison with the volume of established automakers. This sort of comparison is standard FUD material, and WSJ editors had the decency to cut it.
"The P85D launch is a litmus test for this model." This line was entirely cut. The notion of a "litmus test" is clearly unmotivated and sets up a kind of strawman hypothesis. In other words, Ramsey is deploying rhetoric to make Tesla look like they are failing in something very critical. Again, WSJ editors had the good sense to cut this.
In analyzing potential FUD, it can be very helpful to pay attention to variations in text. In the world of online publishing it can be simple to change the text, but in doing so we can see the differences in original intent and the role of editors to cover that intent.
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Since this text is valuable for analysis, I would prefer to keep it. I know that this is contrary to TMC. Can anyone find a link to an identical online version? Bonus points to the first person!
Edit: Found it!
Tesla Posts Short Waiting Time for Upscale P85D Model S - NASDAQ.com
It looks like Robert got Curt's post.