I've now had my Model 3 for more than a week and combined with my Media day access (around a track), I feel I know the car enough to write the full review. It's long at 7,500+ words and I could easily have kept writing, but someone has to read it. If you have some time, grab a coffee and check out the full detailed review -
Review: Tesla Model 3 Long Range AWD Performance - techAU
First paragraph: "a ground-up
redesign that asked engineers" this should be "design" since it did not start from anything S related other than the basic concepts.
First paragraph about Flush Door handles: "These obviously come at a greater
expensive than passive door handles" should be "expense. Also, cost-saving should be hyphenated.
Second paragraph about Aero Wheels: "If
you’re Model 3 " really, do I have to say?
Third paragraph about the glass roof: "is
avaialble thanks to the battery" misspelling.
Third paragraph regarding the Minimalist Dash: "a non issue", this should be hyphenated.
Later in the same section: "addition of
Buggy Racing 2". Not 100% sure here, but isn't the game called "Beach Buggy Racing 2"?
First paragraph of the Steering Wheel section: "
You interface to driving the Model 3", should be "Your"
Third Paragraph of Steering Wheel section: "I
defintiely think the wheels", "number of vehicle
operaitons", "features is
admitedly a lot less often", "something only
availble with" spelling mistakes (might want to spell check the whole document).
First paragraph of Performance Section: " the
geforces applied", should be "G-forces" or more formally "acceleration" or just forces since technically, the g-forces are constant since you are on Earth, the dominant source of gravity in the area.
"100km/
hr.": should be "100km/h" since the SI unit for time is "h", not "hr".
Second paragraph of Performance Section: "speed,
you’re adrenaline" should be "your".
"I’ve had
behidnd the wheel" another spelling error.
Third paragraph: "Most cars with this much performance are pretty average to drive at low speeds, but at all speeds,
the Model 3 is just plain easy that anyone could drive it": This sentence make very little sense.
"ensure all
4 wheels
acheive maximum" should be "four" and "achieve".
"There’s no
screaching tyres" Should be "screeching"
"different
than other" should be "from", things differ from other things, they don't "differ than other things".
Fourth paragraph: "When you need to turn,
accerlerate, brake, turn accelerate again, the car feels
nible and responsive": "accelerate", "nimble"
At this point I ran out of patience. The content of the article is not bad, but it needs a lot more editing!